Peace – impossible,
Health – understated.
Movements – powerful,
Inflation – accelerated.
Breathing – essential,
Stress – overrated.
Politics – mental,
Life – calculated.
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Peace – impossible,
Health – understated.
Movements – powerful,
Inflation – accelerated.
Breathing – essential,
Stress – overrated.
Politics – mental,
Life – calculated.
I feel that by reading this I get a road map of Imagine’s Nation:)
I like the simplicity… there’s so much unsaid that it forces the reader to think about their own definitions and analogs. With each statement I find myself thinking of a all the different ways one term might equal the other, not necessarily in agreement, but forced to “fill in the blank” or try to understand why you chose what you did.
I feel that this could be a very firtile piece for future exploration. Any one of these statements would make a great haiku or short poem or even a short story…
I love to read your writing. I feel you reveal a lot of yourself through it 🙂
Thank you for the feedback as always… much obliged.
I concur. What’s important with this piece is what is NOT said, leaving the reader to fill in the blanks with her/his own sentiments. A broader picture can be painted with these very simple yet powerful observations, allowing us to reflect and stretch the limitations.