The Eastbound Haiku

Thursday, October 23, 2014

What no one tells you:
Once off the ground, the earth spins
Away beneath you.

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One Comment

  1. thinayr thinayr says:

    Haiku perfection. So simply worded, yet it blasts the reader into orbit to ponder this strangely lofty feeling. I also like how the first line makes it seem like there is secret/taboo knowledge here… Like the epitaph of a philosopher years ahead of his time.

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